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Apr. 07, 2016

Rating: 5

Really interesting project, good work! A little unsolicited writing tip: the narrative would be even more compelling if your protagonist struggled more and faced more failures. Everything seemed to go really swimmingly, especially as the other characters were introduced, and I found myself waiting for some "oomph" that never arrived. All in all, cool structure and a very enjoyable little game. :)

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Oct. 10, 2007

Rating: 0

Thanks for all the great reviews guys, I appreciate it! About the polish jokes - I really didn't mean to offend anyone, that is just how I learned the jokes and think they should be told. I have nothing against the polish, and understand that the stereotypes in these jokes are untrue. Please understand that if someone were to tell me an American joke, I would not get offended. Everyone should be able to laugh at themselves, or what people think of them! I will include a disclaimer in the next game about the nationality of jokes I will have unlockable, but refuse to change them. I firmly believe that jokes should be told the way they were meant to be told, and not changed to be politically correct.