It's great that you are out creating something and you have a start. I would check the spelling of words unless the miss-spelling is a style choice.
You might want to try using something like http://www.inklestudios.com/inklewriter or other interactive fiction authoring tools to get your story more fleshed out as well either for updates to this game or for your next attempt.
Please keep makings games only way to improve is practice!
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