Pertokeyo's Comments

The graphics are competent and creative. The bold colours and gracious animations throughout compliment the otherwise static background. The presentation, especially in the menus and slime text show that you are raising your profile. Sound effects are appropriate, suitable and clean. I really favour the slushy alien kill sound – it’s one of the best I’ve heard. The music completely immerses me in the experience. Overall it’s an impressive game that makes good use of an upgrade system, and more importantly a life system which is crucial. The progression design still feels a little elementary and crude, but the execution of basic interaction leaves a sweet if imperfect taste. *** 3 / 5 ***

I quite enjoyed your game. It has all the elements which make is functional, playable and exciting. Very few amateur developments have bosses or create various levels that are optional from a menu. In terms of gameplay I found the difficulty quite refreshing, although the stages were too short, though without any seriously noticeable errors in the programming I can only encourage you to expand rather than fix. Truly the graphics show that you are putting some commitment into your games. It takes a lot of raw talent to create stunning visuals, but you’ve tried hard and done well. Various objects like the ships animate upon collisions and the frame rate is smooth. Now the audio is laughable and predictable, but I suppose I’d rather hear cheesy copied soundtracks than nothing. I’m glad you used individual sound effects for each level though. Your games show promise and without major flaws present you should focus on creating a larger and more expansive game using your determination.

I really can't commend this much. You need to rethink about how much effort you're putting into making games because none is coming across here. You have two poorly drawn and designed mazes that can be click-held and right clicked {menu} to cheat. The promise of new additions seem admirable, but fresh innovations {changes} are required. Look carefully at where you place clickable objects too, as the top of the play button meets with the maze for instant game over. Graphically it is boring and mundane; lacking in beauty, elegance and sparkle. There is no animation at all and the writing is barely legible. Try carefully drawing little ambient details to make each level feel unique. Once you've made the necessary improvements think about some audio. Take some time with your work - it could really pay off in terms of personal achievement.

This is a typical and mundane game of snake, but you've made minor alterations to it. Firstly you've increased the speed at the cost of the walls. This does add the element of key stroke accuracy and increase the difficulty quickly, but without an option to slow it down the result is limited. Try using different speeds as alternative game modes accessible from a menu. Also you may want to create more excellent backgrounds for each mode or made selectable via number key. Try to animate and texture the snake with lighting and bodily ridges. You also need to design and program a high score board to keep users contesting against each other and coming back for more; the addition of audio would make that more enjoyable. Uniqueness is something that you need to add to your snake games, and this can be done through effort and initiative.

There are lot of really poor snake games on Kongregate, ones that use simple templates and add nothing unique. This isn't one of them. You've taken snake and added your own cartoon like touch to it. But it's very easy and it takes an agonisingly long time for the difficulty to be sufficient although I can see very young kids perhaps being satisfied by it. The best addition is the face which changes on collision. But because you're lacking a lot of extra presentation, leading to a lack of replayability, the game bores quickly. There needs to be high scores obtainable through different modes. You could also try implementing obstacles that the snake must avoid. Finally, when you're settled with the theme find some audio which melds well with it.

I can see you've put some effort into this game, it's far from the worst maze game I've seen. However it's still extremely basic, short and unexciting. You need to execute some more ideas such as moving blocks and time restricted areas to create a challenge, although I loved the idea of invisibility. With this you need to make your maze many times more attractive - a green fill won't impress anyone. If you have blank areas in your maze try some ambient decorations, regardless of your drawing skill it will give us something to look at. Add audio that matches the pace of the game and submit your work again at anytime.

The comments are a little harsh, your game is certainly not bad. The gameplay is simplistically basic, without any deviation from the standard circles, but the programming behind them is good. The difficulty is variable depending on the random appearances and speeds of the circles. The only problem is that most of the time the best strategy is to simply move around in a circle, which would be easier to do with the mouse rather than letter keys. The main highlight is the smooth meshy colours and the rich trails; it has a real certain style to it and it's presented very well. Your menu text has great composure. The music is slightly obscure but suitable, however you are missing a number of sound effects for new spawns and acceleration of the blue ball.

This is actually a fairly well constructed game. It has many of the basic fundamentals needed for satisfying gameplay. The shooting mechanics work but you need to make it clearer where you need to hold the mouse to make sure everybody understands how to enjoy it. The difficulty is about right but it requires significant expansion. Before each level there could be a shop where upgrades {eg reload speed} can be brought for either score points or coins. Graphically I think this is incredible. Firstly the menu page has a breathtaking amount of detail and wonderfully bold colours. The frame rate is a little choppy, perhaps requiring a slight increase, but doesn't ruin the professional presentation. These amazing graphics continue into main game where the animation is competent and fluid. The experience is complimented with two fairly generic background tracks and a finely tuned cannon sound.

This is a compact but competent game. The gameplay is simple but playable, and exciting. However the red bubbles appear randomly and can trap the wheel without warning, therefore occasionally bringing in an unnecessary luck element. The graphics are zany and spice up an otherwise blank boring black background. The sounds take the game on an acid trip because they are so appropriate to the crazy feel of the game.

The gameplay mechanics are acceptable, but the presentation of them is dire. The paddle looks like a white brush stroke done in half a second and does not reflect the actual detection area. It is also difficult to get the first hit if the ball moves along the radius in the opposite direction to where your paddle is. Bring the visuals up a level by adding colours, an animated ball and movement trails. Meld them together with good audio.