My Grandfather smoked his whole life. I was about 10 years old when my mother said to him, 'If you ever want to see your grandchildren graduate, you have to stop immediately.'. Tears welled up in his eyes when he realized what exactly was at stake. He gave it up immediately. Three years later he died of lung cancer. It was really sad and destroyed me. My mother said to me- 'Don't ever smoke. Please don't put your family through what your Grandfather put us through." I agreed. At 28, I have never touched a cigarette. I must say, I feel a very slight sense of regret for never having done it, because these comments gave me cancer anyway.
I really liked it, you have a lot of potential! What I would say is maybe slow the background down, add checkpoints, a pause function, and make it automatically restart when you die on the spikes.
It's a very good game, you're a very talented developer, you should definitely try to go further, be more ambitious! You're going to do well.
These are beautiful games, a pleasure to play. I adore the symbolism. Ivory, you are a true artist. Amazing. These games are probably the most important step to the acceptance of games in the art culture. Truly echanting.