Derek's Mario World

1 change the gravity and lower the taller obstacles, so that way he doesn't jump as high and stomping on enemies feels more like actually jumping on them not directing artillery fire. 2 tight spaces do not work well with these kind of games. 3 you should improve your usage of the tileset, it seems rough and unproffessional, try to use more than 2 blocks for your levels. 4 Utilize the Kongregate API, so that people will have a reason to kill your makeshift goombas and so that you will make more money. 5 Shorten the fade out times, If I go through a door I don't want to watch the door for the next 5 seconds. 6 set it so that the actors can't rotate if you haven't already, I've observed some examples of them rotating and it does not help in a game like this. 7 If you try to make another game please refrain from uploading it before it's completion. It's one thing to update your work; it's another to upload something lacking such vitals as menus, storylines, endings, etc.

An okay game as another Mario clone-- some originality will be appreciated here.

If you need any help using Stencyl, please contact me in any way you can or want and I would be very willing to aid you. My Stencyl account is the same name as my Kongregate account. My only other advice: you are now an artist, you may choose to remain inadequate or strive to be the best you can be. It is entirely your choice.

Good game for what it is. Keep working on it. ;) 4/5.

I am glad that you are still working on your game. However, it's best to upload your game to kongregate after everything is done. That way, you'll get better ratings in the beggining. This way, not many people will come back to play the game. Just a word of advice to a fellow developer.