Pretty good! I like the back story, and you have obviously put a lot of thought into this. I will say that you should watch your handwriting... I originally thought the nuke button said "nulse" for some reason... Definitely make more!!! Does my character somehow come back to life in the next game (reincarnation, ghost, etc?) How did he end up in his battle? Is this game based off of another book/work of art? Keep the creativity rolling!!!
pretty cool. :) Could you add some more levels? You could have an "underground level" where everything is colored brown, an above ground level with green themes, and a sky level. how about an interesting backstory about those creepy eyes? Why are they following you? Why does the diamond need to get to the sun? This game definitely has potential. It kept me playing and I hope to see more.
Gomgossa is NOT a nurse. The Dore bell was the key to Pete coming out of his coma. Gomgossa told him to forget about the Dore bell and just go play. In dreams, dark creepy scenes represent the "gut truth of something" whereas the fair cloudy scenery represents lies. There are two forces at work. Gomgossa who looks fair and feels foul, vs. Bird and the Dore bell, which looks foul but feels fair.
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thanks bro i will try harder on the next one, it's gonna be really good :)