Thanks for all of your comments everyone, we're deeply moved by all of your comments.
If you want more of this, we're currently developing Fragments of Him as a complete game, you can read more over here: http://fragmentsofhim.com/ (if you want to pre-order it, shoot me a PM over here and i'll get you a discount).
Very well done sir, played it a couple of times and I have to say that I'm pretty bad at it, but it's very nice. The controls could use a bit of refinement though (I'm assuming it's the default FPS controller or a modified version of that?).
You're definitely a worthy competitor, take a 4/5 rating and may the best man win.