THANKS FOR ALL OF THE COMMENTS. Sorry for posting the same stuff over and over but i idea well has run dry Inkubus, guitarman good stuff. yeah so my other song, i like it without the lead guitar but sounds nice either way
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there we go.lol ok so i listened to your song and what immediately stands out is a tempo issue. mute the bass and listen to the drums and the lead guitar then mute the bass and listen to the drums with the bass and you'll notice the tempos dont flow together, ok sorry for boring you.lol
least impressive of the 3 i posted, more shredding then melodic masterpiece lol
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I have another good song, i like my other one more but this has its own charm, taking out the lead guitar gives it a different feel but still good. called Song4 because it was the 4th song i made lol
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If you listen to this it WILL NOT be a waste of your time. I have a musical sense, please comment/shout/whisper rip if you feel it in you. Its called SupaSong
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