Decent, but I understood the point you were making quickly. It takes too long to get to the end screen message. I would shorten this 'not-game' down a bit unless you added few more interesting pieces.
For the Jungle area, I can't find the path to the next room. I'm in the 2nd room with just Venom snakes and there's 2 pieces of land connected by a small bridge. Anyone know how to get to the next part?
Not bad, I get the frustrating gameplay, but it really does take away from the immersion of the story at some points. A bit more balance is needed. Very interesting story though.