really good storyline, really good music, really cool gameplay. The writing needs a little work and the green text at the end isn't fitting for the mood - try making an image of your own handwriting or using a text that looks like handwriting over top of a paper background, and have it fade out at the end
Civiballs makes my computer lag terrribly. I have a fairly robust computer. Something is terribly wrong with the code here, there is a memory leak somewhere.
+1