Fun game, but I agree that the dialogue needs some polishing. Possible english-second language developer so it's forgivable, but it does detract from the game somewhat nonetheless.
Just a thought on updates - How about tying in the "Upgrades" with our avatar, in the notion of being able to change our background scenery thanks to various later-game upgrades, ie; "Purchase a fleet of cargo planes," or "hire an army of accountants" actually produces noticeable changes in the avatar screen? Possibly even have the avatar screen be bigger, and more interactive part of the game process?
Decent game that has potential, but holy Christ-on-a-cracker the spelling and grammar was lacking. I would be willing to help edit the script if the developer needed assistance.
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