Bad or good comments are the same, with out comments we would never improve our selfs.
I uploaded this not as a mega game or as look what i can do, more that how easy it was with this book to learn C# and unity and to promote this book to anyone who felt the need as i do to make games.
Yes i agree that it is missing content and a story line, their is much more i could do to this tutorial, but i wanted to make my own game. Thus I have started to make my own game, but i have the urge to take on your comments and improve this Tutorial in my own way.
Also i am sorry i missed your comments, maybe i forgot to tick a box to receive feed back.