I love the concept of the game but theres definetly a quite a few improvements to be made before it can be taken seriously.
First of all you've got a lovely artistic premise but the lack of any story makes it difficult enjoy.
The add needs to go in a game like this its really immersion breaking.
The focus should probably go from precision control to a more exploration focused gameplay.
You also need to add more vareity to the gameplay.
Great start to a game and I look forward to seeing more from you.
Very good basis for a game but is still a bit underdeveloped.
Needs a few more features to keep it interesting and some background music would be nice.
Great start to a game, only flaw in what you've got so far is the way the music reacts as you move the mouse, it's a bit too jerky figure out a way to smooth that out and should be all good.
Fix your interface, your graphics, add sound, and spice up the gameplay a little and you will have a truly great game.
At the moment you have the core of a really good game but I'm afraid thats all.
This feels very, very Amnesia: Dark Descent inspired (that's a very good thing).
I'm curious to know if you've played it, and would love to see what you could get up to with their dev tools.