If your going to make a quest item obtainable through the slot machine thing then make the chances higher cause its annoying wasting hp pots trying to get it because for the boss you have to fight.
dubiousmerit i think the story line is pretty good guess u just didn't pay attention to it very much or didn't care to pay it no mind sure on the one dungeon that goes on forever should have something like a save spot so u can go back to the same lvl u was on if u wanted but other then that it was just like the pet protector dungeon style and the thing about having a house is so that when u beat the game u have something more to do and for the crafting the crafting opens it up so if u didn't want to buy things u could just make them and proably some of them are more powerful then the artifacts
NE45 i beat the demon the first time i fought him i think the game is a great game i always loved game from underfined hes one of my favorite flash game makers but u should really put a thing where if u have the same item for crafting if u want to buy the same item again or put it where the item just disappears since u learned it and u no longer need it unless it serves as a way of learning that one item better and better with each buy
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