I feel like if you introduced more scenes, each with a "hold one button" mechanic, you could make certain times produce certain storylines. That would be interesting.
Oh wow, I adored The Company of Myself, and what a prequel! By GOD, what a good fillmwriter you'd make. Amazing. Your work is BEYOND exceptional - good job again, as usual, at making something truly thought-provoking; these are less games than works of cerebral art.