I really like the concept of the game, and the story as well. But I began finding the English grammar a little frustrating. Like Wulfe27 says, it has a bit of an unpolished feel to it. If you need an English editor, feel free to message me, as I freelance with that sort of thing.
It remind me of Dark City a lot more than the Matrix.
Good concept, but I think it could have been improved by some kind of character development system, aside from picking up just a few random items.
Other than that, it was pretty good