Really quite excellent. I really enjoyed the little leaps of faith and intuitive steps you have to take as the game subtly gives you just enough to go on.
A playable and well-executed game. You lose a star for the big, distracting advert in the corner and another for the overblown croaky voiceover though. (Sorry kids, I'm feeling vindictive today.)
What a charming, novel game, Ben. Real fairytale wish-fulfillment stuff. I really like the concept. The choice of controls was appreciated, and multiple endings is aways a good thing. I enjoyed Tom's music and backgrounds too. Constructive criticisms: That font is hard to read; every screen should include a challenge, or the click through story ones feel somewhat superfluous; I felt you rushed into the story, splitting the second screen into two screens and introducing the situation more slowly would pace it better; centering the story box would prevent the annoying black gap underneath it; the screens were cluttered by those symbols. However, these are all subjective pet peeves, and the game is genuinely enjoyable.
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I'm glad you picked up on all the clues in the background guiding you. Thanks for playing.