Every time I start this game up, it has me start from the very beginning. I don't think it's a problem with my computer, and I would appreciate something being done about it
The art style in this game is really similar to VasantJ's Medieval Cop games, and I love it! (I know he didn't make that aesthetic, but his games are what I most strongly associate it with)
I could honestly see this as a pretty good short anime. I even have an idea of who would voice each of the contestants.
Ink: Vic Mignogna/Johnny Yong Bosch
Aether: Monica Rial/Luci Christian
Rae: Johnny Yong Bosch/Chris Sabat
Beth: Linda Young
Liza: Cherami Leigh
@DefaultState I said the same thing in another idle game a while back (it might even have been this one, I don't know), and the response I got was that it is just shorthand. If it were in an academic setting, it would be written differently, but since this is just a game, the shorthand is acceptable.
I was going to say that this was the best one yet, but then I remembered that every last installment of this series has absolutely phenomenal! What I can say, though, is that it was amazing to see into the minds of some of the background characters (that aren't Amber). I especially loved how you addressed the concept of living with your grief instead of forgetting it. Moving on is fine, but you should always remember what was important to those you lost.
Did you take writing/storytelling classes? Because the fact that you have been able to get so many people so emotionally invested in a story and characters using such a minimalistic art style is absolutely amazing.
That is a really nice thing to read and it made my day! I am a frustrated writer actually and I love watching movies and reading books with great stories. So that's where I got my inspirations from
with the higher number values (the ones you use scientific notation for), you should either have [number]*10^[power] or [number] E [power]. Just having the number, the carat, and the power would mean multiplying the number by itself the number of times in the power. For example, what you have as 3.720^6 is not 3,720,000. It is actually 2650.07179141.
The part where you have antidepressants depicted as a bad thing makes no sense. Antidepressants are something people who suffer from clinical depression take in order to function in society, and Amber throwing hers out doesn't mean that she is ready to get back to work, it means that she got rid of the thing that would allow her to function at work.
That is a really nice thing to read and it made my day! I am a frustrated writer actually and I love watching movies and reading books with great stories. So that's where I got my inspirations from