Ok, you're right .I have fixed it now (on the server) and it works properly. In the main menu, there is a Recover Save button. Click on it and you're going to see your save. I checked and your save works fine.
Seriously, everything is good but the writing. Can't I get no alliteration? Allusion? Maybe a leitmotif now and again? Where's the drama? Where's the humor? The POV doesn't change a bit and the characters are puppets. I can't stand to read past the Present:Street scene.
Ok, you're right .I have fixed it now (on the server) and it works properly. In the main menu, there is a Recover Save button. Click on it and you're going to see your save. I checked and your save works fine.