Interesting concept. Suggestions:
1. Differentiate the owners from the employees more. Hard to tell them apart.
2. Fix the typos!! It's maddening to try and read through the scenes and have it be so stilted and awful.
Fun game, interesting approach. Controls took me a little bit of getting used to, but were intuitive once I learned how they worked. Very solid foundation here - I'd love to see it developed further and have a long, in-depth version 2 to suck up hours of play time.
Good alpha version of a game; bad final release. No depth, no nothing. There are enough examples of how to approach this genre that a game so lacking in features simply shouldn't be.