I enjoyed reading this very much, the only thing I didn't really like about it was,
*spoilers*
he only gets Angela if he protects her from the random guy, or gives her angelfire?
excluding the ending where he gets to be with her in africa as a friend, but not as lovers.
Great! But you can't really lose the game, and since you can't lose the game (die). But, it was okay, I liked the story. But no info on that eating thingymajiggy?
4/5, I liked it, but seriously? It ends with the 3 bears, their van, and the bear with the gun not saying anything but his talk bubble is there anyways?