Ok, I can make fun of simple grammatical errors and stuff like that and the story was kind of funny (Was a really supposed to care that much about the dog that quickly?), but when an effect you put on a game makes the gameplay shittier, that's when I draw the line. I saw how it sped up and got cleaner when the rain stopped at the end. That bothers me to no end. If the gameplay will suffer due to an effect in the game, DON'T ADD IT!
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