That was so cool. Can't wait to see a full game. The only thing I don't like though is the art for the princesses. It looks odd and cheap. I might be the only one tho.
I played this game a while ago and it really had an impact on me, though I thought its premise could be explore more. This weeks in school I've been studying magical realism in literature and It reminded me of this game. For one of my final projects I gotta write a hipertext based on magical realism and I couldn't lose the opportunity to have it revolve around this text. I hope it won't end up being too weird for my class haha but Hey, thanks for making such an interesting game.
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