To be honest, I do like the graphics, etc. of the game, but the story is extremely generic. Though that isn't necessarily a deal breaker, the mediocre level of English in your game does distract a lot from the story and, quite frankly, does make it appear worse than similar games.
This is an extremely educational game. Who needs several years in medical school when you can just play this for a couple of minutes? From now on I'll use mustard on all of my cuts and bruises, which'll probably be the result of my handy box cutter use.
When I got my first beer I felt a slight feeling of regret, which luckily passed as I drank more. Even though my stomach turned, my eyes hurt and I kept falling off bridges for some reason. Anyhow, nice game, though difficult to play while drunk...