Cool game, I like it.
Are you inspired of this game here?
https://www.kongregate.com/games/lerpinglemur/theory-of-magic?haref=HP_TGTM_theory-of-magic
I like your kind of UI division to get the Story progres, but the "Graphics" (or kind of that ;-) ) in the original Game are better (I mean the Progress bars and Color). Also the whole content is much more than your one. Maybe you could do a merging of the Game with him, so you both could get a good game (part 2 or so) together?
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