I understand the grammar and story is lacking. When i wrote it i just was working more on gameplay, even though the gameplay is pretty bad. It is only the second game i have made using flash and obviously, i am no artist. The final version will have a more in depth story and all the grammar will be correct.
For people who want it longer, im planning on making another game in the same area as this one. this is my first game so i just wanted to see how uploading and everything worked. If u liked it there is more to come.