oh god the writing. sure this game is made for kids and RPG Players but atleast make the writing fell tolerable for everyone not just for kids.not that i want to put swearing in this game (don't put swearing in a game that you planing to make a game for everyone) overall the game is good though abit repetitive and the story (in my opinion) is weak and i don't feel connected to the main character cause he fells like a boring mary sue then again i've haven't finish the game yet so i'll comment again if i've finish the game (if i can comment again kongregate is still new to me)
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