Good story, and absolutely heart-wrenching for both endings. Plenty of room for development, though. This could be the basis for a much longer story. I would probably pay money for it then. 4/5 only because it's so short.
The objective system is weird, or at least it was for me. Kept doing things like having a target wealth of 20% and target money at $400, and for some reason they weren't the same, and it would give me a game over.
It would be more fun if the objectives weren't so glitchy like that.
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