trash game is trash. Your lack of grasp of the english language prevents you from writing a decent story in it. I frequently found myself re-writing blocks of text just so they would make gramatical sence. I advise to either stick to your native lexicon, or skip "writing" altogether. Preferably the latter. Your unwillingness to compromise on the graphics makes your game near impossible to play. I had to do some areas 20 times over just because my controls wouldn't respond in time. I counted an 8 second lag between my pressing 'jump' and the character Acctually jumping at one point. I feel sorry for the creator of Knytt for being so comparible to your work. A good producer works With the people in creating a good game. Hence Beta testing. You clearly have potential however, so do not throw it away in favor of pride. And do not post moar because moar.
IT'S A POO JOKE!... Inside-a-ya.. character's brown, splatters when it hits a fan... I like the way it slides down walls.. the whole time, I couldn't stop thinking "great, another sh**** metroid knock-off!". At any rate. great game though short. Vote + because +
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