Instead of having a bunch of moves with the same buttons, He should make another game like this, use distance. Long, medium, and short range attacks. that would make this game better.
I think that is is too much text based.
I clicked 200 times(just estimate) just to get through to go to the mines. Shorten the text and give it more thought than just everyone auto maticaly knowing what to do.
2 outta 5 no offense