I agree with Wurzel's comment. Great job, but I'd love to see some of those issues addresses in a future version. Music, sound effects, and maybe even an animated mouse?
(Part Two) So, the royal Taybees did ask each of the animals in turn to aid in their endeavour. They asked the noble Manatee, and the Tufted Titmouse, and the Blue-Footed Booby, but none were able to assist. At last, they came across the intrepid chipmunk, who was, amongst all of God's creatures, the most industrious. 'Noble chipmunk, wouldst help us in our endeavour?' asked the Queen, to which the chipmunk did reply, "Ch-ch-ch-cha!", which in the tongue of the chipmunks meant 'yes'. The chipmunk, whose name was Crispy, worked night and day on the project, and was soon accomplished to the delight of all. The kongregation did sing and buzz, as like to a chorus of kazoos, and all was right with the universe."
(From "The Book of The Hive", Chapter One.) "In the beginning, there was The Great Void, and the Taybees did look upon it with a great sadness. 'Tis a rather lonely void, father,' said young Reman Bee to his father, King Mst. 'Tis much like a child picked last for kickball. Would that we might build upon it, and make within it our home.' King Mst did grin, and patting his son's head, did make it so. His wife, Queen Gwen, oversaw the construction, and the hexagons did flow with honey and pupae, and the brethren did gather together in joy and song. Soon, however, King Mst did fill a longing for more. 'My beloved,' he said to his Queen, 'This past night, I didst have a dream in which our home had a place to kongregate in the joys of chat. All three of us were there, floating before a giant barn, and grinning.' Queen Gwen kissed his cheek and smiled. 'Tis a lovely dream indeed. We shall make it a reality for the kongregation.'