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I wrote this when I was like 13 in 2011 or so I think

Cast of the show:

Dontea – An elemental mindly powerful character

Luna – The brain and bron

Rosa – The wild card

Kiro – Dontea’s pet fox

Celia – Cynthias pet fox

Cynthia – Former special op, Pub owner

Frenzy – Darkness demon, wolf form, turns into shark underwater, Bonded with Luna mentally and spiritually, Celia’s boyfriend

Toki – The mysterious masked one

Zboy – The action junky

Ras – The whiny one

Ava – The crazy one

Night – The awesome gun/sword slinger

The Grest Escape (pt.1)
(note to the viewer: Luna is blind.)

At the Base
Don: “Blegh.”
Toki: “What is there to do?”
Don: “I don’t know.”
Somewhere
Ava: (walks over to a well)
Ava: (leans over the side and shouts) “HEEEELLLLLLOOOOOOOOO!!”
At the Pub
Frenzy: (still lying beside Celia)
At the Base
Don: “Hmmmm”
At the Pub
Celia: “Good morning Frenzy..”.
Frenzy: “Morning.”
Celia: “Did you have fun watching me?”
Frenzy: “I wasn’t trying to creep you out…
Celia : “i know” (giggle)
Frenzy: (blushes slightly) “~So, um, did you sleep well?”
Celia: “Yes.”
Celia: “Why arn’t you ever tired?”
Frenzy: “I never sleep, really.
At the Base
Toki: “Man i’m bored”
Don: “Let’s bug Luna”
Ava: (lays on the bed in her room)
(they walk into lunas office and start anoying her)
Luna: (groans)
Luna: (moans) “What do you want..?” (only half conscious)
Don: “Money to get some new freaking cars we’re all out.”
Luna: “How’re you all out?” (sits up, hair and stuff’s a mess)
Toki: “Last weeks Russia mission….”
Ava: (Trudges into the office) “Anyone have a mop?”
Don: (hands her one)
Ava: Thanks (walks out grumbling)
At the Pub
Cynthia: (fixing drinks)
Frenzy: (thinks: Luna must be worried about me.)
Celia: “Maybe you should go before Luna gets mad.”
Frenzy: “I don’t think she’ll be mad, but I’ll check up on her.” (walks off) “Thanks for everything.
Celia: “You are welcome and bye.”
Frenzy: (vanishes)
At the Base
Luna: (walks over to front door, then hug tackles Frenzy as he appears) “OMG I missed you so much!”
Frenzy: x.x"
Frenzy: “Hello.
Luna: (sits down, smiling) “So, how was Celia?”
Frenzy: “She’s so nice.
Luna: “^^ I’m glad you like her.”
At the Car Dealership
Salesmen: “I’m sorry did you say TWO THOUSAND green jeeps?!”
Don: (nods)
Toki: “We will be paying in check.”
Kiro: “Uh huh…”
Salesmen: “Okay then.”
Ten Minutes Later
Don: “Ah crap, how are we gonna get these back?”
Toki: “Airlift?”
Kiro: (on the radio.)
Toki: (gets in a jeep and drives.)
Don: (follows Toki in a seperate jeep with kiro still on the radio.)
At the Base
Frenzy: (in Luna’s room, looking at window.)
Luna: (in office, looking at Frenzy worriedly.)
(Don, Toki, and Kiro are driving up a ton of helicopters behind them.)
(the helicopter drops the jeeps in the vehical depot while Toki and don park outside the base.)
Luna: (thinks: That fox is all he ever thinks about..)
(all three get out and walk inside)
(Don,Toki,and Kiro flop down on the couch)
Luna: (scribbling things on paper)
Frenzy: “Forgive me…
Frenzy: (induces sleep on Luna.)
Luna: (trying to resist it.) “What the hell..?”
Luna: (eventually falls unconscious.)
Frenzy: (runs out front door and stops in front of gate.)
Frenzy: (takes a few steps back.)
Frenzy: (runs and jumps over the gate.)
At the Pub
Celia: “My trouble senses are tingling…”
Frenzy: (walks into the pub)
Celia: “Frenzy…”
Frenzy: “Hello.
Celia: “Hi…”
Frenzy:" What’s wrong…?"
Celia: “I just feel that something bad is about to go down.”
Frenzy: “Like what exactly?”
Celia: “I don’t know i’m not that pysicic.”
Frenzy: “Maybe it’s just that I’m around…
Celia: “Did you do something?”
Frenzy: “Just put Luna to sleep.
(Celia doesn’t know that he means sleep sleep)
Celia: “OH MY GOD!”
Frenzy: o-o! “What?
Celia: “You killed her?!”
Frenzy: “NO! I would never do that!
Frenzy: “I mean literally she’s snoring right now!” x.x
Celia: “Oh…”
Frenzy: (cackles) “Is that the danger you sensed?
Celia: “If you just made her fall asleep that couldn’t be it…”
Frenzy: (shrugs)
(tire screeches)
(Don gets out of a green jeep with a trank. gun in his hand)
Celia: “Oh no…”
Frenzy:" That can’t be good.."
Celia: “You’ve gotta run frenzy!”
Frenzy: “Not without you!
Celia: “Ok then, lets go! (trots to the back door)”
The Back Ally
Frenzy: (walking beside Celia)
Celia: (watches don go in and walks across the street with frenzy)
Frenzy: “A stroll, nice idea.
Celia: “Where’s your big idea?” .
Frenzy: “I’m still thinking of one.” ;-;
(cynthia screaming and rapid footsteps are heard)
Celia: “Run!”
Frenzy: (follows her instructions)
Celia: (runs like a mongouse on steroids)
(a dart lands just missing them)
Don: “I missed!”
Don: (reloading)
Frenzy: (Oa portal opens, both Celia and I vanish inside)
Cynthia: “Good job, captain obvious!”
(the portal would then close)
The Amazon Forest, South America
Frenzy: (reappears in a South American forest beside Celia)
Frenzy:( Are you alright?)
Celia: “Yeah.”
Frenzy: (sighs in relief)
Celia: “Where are we?”
Frenzy: “The Amazon.
Celia: “Wow.”
Frenzy: “Sorry, this was the least remote place I could think of…
Celia: “It’s quite ok i always wanted to go to south america.” :D
Frenzy:" Then it works out."
Celia: (giggle) “That’s what she said.”
Frenzy: “…I can’t believe you just said that.
Celia: “Yeah it was a one time thing.”
Celia: “Just wanted to try it.”
Frenzy:" …no comment."
Frenzy: “So, what do you want to look at while we’re here?
Celia: look at? i want to mess with the tigers.”
(Celia has a very large knack for danger)
Frenzy: “Ambitious, I see.
Frenzy: “Why were they chasing us?
Celia: “Maybe because their wolf and fox just tried to run away to live forever somwhere else?”
Frenzy: “Tried?
Frenzy: “I was certain we succeeded.
Frenzy: (smiles a bit)
Celia: “We arn’t out of the heat yet”
Celia: “If i know Don he NEVER gives up until he wins…”
Celia: “… he’ll give in in about two days.”
Frenzy: “Yeah.
Celia: “So where exactly are we supposed to live?”
Frenzy: “Wherever you would like.
Celia: “I always pick. it’s your turn.”
Frenzy: “I want your happiness.
Celia: “And i you.”
Celia: “Why don’t we agree on something?”
Frenzy:“I can settle…
At the Base
Luna: (sitting at desk, tears hitting the floor)
Toki: “Poor Luna….”
TO BE CONTINUED

MY POEM

as the bullet shell drops to the ground i think about what i have done this asassination has only begun yet my hands are shaking my smile is fading my heart slowing down im sure my victim is hell bound my life is becoming a twist as i raise my fist and slam it into the mans jaw the crowd simply stands in awe my life as an assassin is falling apart i realize it was from the start as i run from the police now i find myself thinking my carrer is profound i decide to turn myself in maybe in prison a new day will begin

TOKI’S DESCRIPTION

I wear a mask much like haku’s (just without the mist symbol) and a green cloak underneath the green cloak is a blue gunner coat, a white t shirt, black gunner pants and boots, a usp .45 handgun on my left leg, a colt revolver on my right and a ningito on my back.

TIME FOR FUNNY BUISNESS!!!

R kelly: now i’ve been asked to come up here, and get you both outta the closet man this is some crazy shit why won’t you both just come out the cloest. tom cruise and john travolta: we’re not coming out the closet so you can just go away. R kelly: but every one wants you out the cloest TC and JT: that doesn’t matter cause we’re gonna stay r kelly: now i’m starting to get angry SO I PULL OUT MY GUN I’M GONNA GIVE YOU TO THE COUNT OF THREE TO OPEN THIS CLOEST 1. I’M GONNA SHOOT YOU BOTH 2. I’M GONNA CAP SOME BITCH 3. …. (door closes) r kelly: now i’m in the closet, now i’m in the closet too

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