i liked the random pictures (kenny from southpark) ;) but i also thought that all i had to do was move my mouse in the exact same direction each time, which made it repetetive and easy. 4/5
the elevator doors close too quickly, so if you don't hurry you die. you can't walk down a flight of stairs properly. grammar needs work and the music is... strange :| 2/5
's okay :) i think everything should bounce off or stay on the screen, instead of disappear beyond it (or at least some kind of indication of where the guy is). and using the down arrow key for falling would make things much simpler. ^^
have you tested this game? at first i wasn't able to jump high enough to get past the first platform. it does seem laggy. and yes, checkpoints are helpful: going through the whole game from the very beginning can be tedious. nice try though... i enjoyed your overall design. ;)
a fantastic, unique storyline... i love the game's simplicity even though there are so many intricate details. my only comment is that it glitches terribly on the last level. other than that, great job.
there were a few challenging castles, but you only had to slightly change the angle of the cannon, so it was overall a pretty straightforward game. i loved the detail in the scenery and the whole old-fashioned look; it was a nice touch.
however, i got the impression that the levels didn't get progressively harder, which made the game slightly dull. 4/5