Two things need to be changed to make this game better: the gaps in the floors need to be bigger and some of the gold medal scores need to be raised. Because of these flaws, I give the game 3/5.
No matter how many times I die from spikes or fire, I don't get the memory. I've killed myself like 100 times both ways. I've gotten other memories, but not this one. It's really weird.
In my opinion, the "Toby's Dream" bonus level is harder than it should be because of two things: The shield doesn't always work (I've been hurt while having a shield quite a few times) and the bombs bounce off of each other and then roll across the ground (and since Toby can't jump you take damage from it). If these two major issues were fixed, the bonus level would be fun, while still being challenging, rather than aggravating.
Oh wow. I'm very sorry about this. I'll try to fix this immediately.