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Level 1: Gret Geme..
Level 2: Great game.
Level 3: This game rocks!
Level 4: Amazing! I LOVE this so much!
Level 5: WOW! This game is creative and fun! I love how you can upgrade everything! This game will always be in my heart!
Wow! I loved this game! This games was so great, I don't understand the title. This is cretive, I love how they even use the background as a mechanic. So great, it deserves the 1/5 i gave it.
1. The thing is that nothing stops when your knight is ready to attack. I think you should try to have a combat system similar to crystal story 2 (http://www.kongregate.com/games/lan14n/crystal-story-ii?acomplete=cryst). And also, try to stop time when you cast spells. I found myself spam clicking the heal button, then trying to move my mouse fast, only to see miner knight die.
2. Oh, the dialogue itself is fine, but it has a major flaw. You have to watch it at a certain pace, which is either really slow, or really fast.
3. In the story, there are some HUGE grammar issues. I wince when I see a knight saying: "Ouch that tickling!" or: "What is with this egg puns?" It really makes me bang my head against my table very hard. Please, please fix the grammar in this. There is also a lack of commas, making the story feeling rushed.
I know this is mostly feedback from other comments. (the people who did this first are Bejita463, and infernal84.) Otherwise, great game.
Great game, but it has has random grammatical mistakes in battles. I constantly saw miner knight say: Ouch that tickling! It's an easy sentence to correct, it needs to be: Ouch, that tickles! But the thing is... he's also saying ouch and that the attack tickles. How about: Ha! That tickles! Also, the story feels rushed, because there are no commas. Not meaning to be a grammar nazi, it just disturbs me.
This game gives you a first impression of an average platformer. Barley any story. But as you go, you find out more about you, and the world, and the war, so as soon you get to the end, you get what's happening. And its scary, dark, depressing. I got chills when i saw subject &#! killed his family. And when he saw the hung guy. This is a great game. But if you don't like dark games, don't play it.