I really liked this game, it's a step higher than episode one (much harder), and it has that immersive story and gameplay. the only thing I would like to suggest is a "save feature": even if you played episode one you still must learn how to play it beyond using the commands and it would be a lot nicer if you don't feel it's mandatory to finish the entire game in one run.
Congratulations!
After seeing this game, I can only say: Don't give up. If you REALLY want to make games and be well known for them you must keep doing, and doing and doing, sometimes taking criticism as a way to improve. I see potential in this game in particular, as others commented : with a little more work in it, it could be an addictive and time-killing game, if you want to, of course.
Looking back at your 60 Second Life, you will find many fond memories of what you have achieved and experienced. You lived your life to the fullest and always took care not too miss out.
You cared about love and took your chances. Not always, but often. You never had much money. But maybe you didn't care much about it anways. You had a handful of close friends and took care of these relationships. You were aware of the importance of your family. Whatever your hobbies were, you were not only extremly good at them, they als incredibly enriched your life. Your hobbies were the only thing you cared for in life and you will always be remembered for the things you accomplished. Let's just hope your life didn't revolve about aimlessly surfing the web and playing flash games.
If desired, send me your email address, and I can send you the desired tutorial (or all 5) as an SWF file.