the story was good but the scenes between the games were just awful, maybe its not the voiceact, but next time try to add some music there (where you did, that was good, like at the intro)
and the third story was a bit silly for me... they were complaining about death... in a war, thats just silly
but the game was unique, and nice, and make the ppl think about it after playing, thats good nice job overall=)