i liked the colourful grafics, and im sure the IDEA would make a wonderful game for a DS system BUT it has to be tweaked by putting in more that one type of enemy also, like mario you could make a way of upgrading your charcter via collecting items and you should also be able to jump on enemys to give you a boost (i would say to kill them but that would be a rip off of mario) other than that it could make a realy nice game :)
It already has a boost to your jump, but I can make it bigger. I'll definitely put in more enemy types, since it appears most people would like more enemies.
dingo has a point, it would be better if 1. there was unlimited map space 2. if you flew through one side, you would come back through the side opposite to the one you just flew into
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It already has a boost to your jump, but I can make it bigger. I'll definitely put in more enemy types, since it appears most people would like more enemies.