1. I won but it said I failed, wich is bad
2. the last gap you gotta go in is impossible to get in, too tight, test your games better.
3. I know its your first game but don't tell me you cant write down''WIN'' or a reset button and draw bigger gaps for the cursor to fit in?
okay i read things better now and its fantastic, but this is pretty much just fallow the story, a lot like immortal, this is better then immortal, because nothing much but poetry is in immortall that make no sense, sure the person who made the poetry had it to remind him of something, but we are not him so we have no idea what he was thinking, so story telling comes to us, but this has actual story, a great fairytale but I couldn't find it any were on google.
I dont get it, why did he have to be killed?
I thought this was a fairytel but no you go to hell see a woman get killed and a little boy o.o so the devil made him pay for their sins?
doing something that you can interact is easy, but making it fun for the users, is a game.
This is not fun to me, you must think what interests others, this doesn't.
luigi mansion thingy is really good, might fix the walking, penguin is too hard, the platform is too far away and i have no idea to do better glitches too a bit sometimes, but luigi should be a game, AND NOT JUST ONLY 1 LIFE!
I actually got into it, it was fun and emotional and loving and all that, but the ending ruined it, it was horrible, just turns the game into something pointless, you could have made better, then the end said live forever immortal, no, you don't get to advance the story, how did the farm folks do? Did he come back to life?
seriously it just turned into crap, artistic yes, the guy probably was thinking about something about himself experience, but hey, we don't have any idea what you are talking about, so the story making comes up to us, 2/5 stars
quite worse then the first one and it said further in the rabbit hole, and your in jail and try to escape, and there is no rabbit hole to be found, meet new friends?
no friendly people are in this game.
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