Some parts just didn't rhyme. When it comes to writing, I guess you didn't have the time. Next time, flesh out the story. Not just the parts that get us all gory. One more thing: avoid the crummy narration. It would make this a better creation. Whenever he said "LENOR;" I started to laugh some more. Do these things and your games will be great.
Signed: a gamer from Kongregate
Ok, but on the mission with the 3 guys who were smoking I just picked them off 1 by one... "Hmmm... My other 2 buddies are dead... I think its time for a smoke break..."
Another add-onto the deposit glitch/bug:
tab until the yellow box is over something and then hold down space (Note: a nickel jammed in the keyboard can usually hold keys down...)
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