firethepoopdeck, your song Majestic Scale is a good start. I can see that you were following an idea, which is great, but the problem is that it is too complexe. Make it more simple. You should start by choosing only a few chords, then make a melody over them. Then when you get used to it you will be able to make more original songs, but you should start that way. Btw, tell me what you think about my song : stellar surf. And other one I have made :)