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@ Dalfar, I thought your tune was good, good build up and good ending, I think the only thing is that if you let all of the notes play its length and overlap it sound cool, if you shorten the length then it doesnt sound as good so id give your song 4.5/5 :)
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@Trayaer Thanks for the comment, I try and not make the notes all mashed up and more rythm, Ill take your advice and do better soon, thanks for the comment! :)
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