Needs to have a like unlimited money version or something, whether or not you have to unlock it but still it would be a good hook to the game.
The money thing isn't quite fair. I know it makes it realistic but start of with a bit more? Besides that it has potential 4/5
www.team-atemis.com/notessimo/saved/20100101173568532.am , I worked on it about 3 hours... I had the idea for the intro+ending before i started the middle i made up as i went
To beat the nightmare, go on the platform, wait and jump off when he gets close, watch the ground for dimples and that's were the boulders drop, make the boulders hit the shadow and get the gems he drops, survive long enough for alotta gems and u win.
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