Spectrum

"space" to jump is really clumsy-why not use "W" or UP arrow like most games?

I really like the art and the ambient music. Congratulations.

OH I FORGOT SOMETHING! The game is too large for the screen, I would try to compress the game so that it fits onto the screen.

Continue from above: Also, sorry if I come across as harsh, and I hope that you take this criticism and develop an even better demo! I think you have a fun game concept, and with further refinement it could be a good game.

Protip: If this is a demo at least have the common courtesy of saying so in the title of the game, hiding it at the bottom of your game description is sleazy and deceptive, and as a customer I do not want to buy anything from someone that gives me the first impression of sleazy and deceptive. Besides that, the controls are a tad rough, and it would be nice if there was more depth to the platforming (higher and lower levels for instance rather than just flat). Also the instructions that pop up are a pain to clear away and caused me to die multiple times. The text is awkward and unfulfilling, though the artwork in the background is nice (though it didn't "take my breath away" to quote Berlin). As the demo currently stands, there is no way I would pay money for this. 1/5 due to demoception and poor execution, if you want a person's money give them a good reason to give it to you.