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A bug caused my (latest) flash player to take a nosedive the first time I attempted to save my game. Fix the bugs, then re-release.
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good foundation, but needs work. fix the grammar. also, the enemy keeps going behind a house and i can't see it anymore. there needs to be a way to rotate the camera
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The game is pretty much unplayable for me. In all browsers I get an error that there is a script which is unresponsive, and my computer pretty much freezes until I abort. Too bad, as I like the game, other than that.
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nice game
it's not stolen (i think)
http://armorgames.com/play/1524/dark-war-strategy-chapter-1
there you can find the original one it's from belugerin too. (4/5)
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rofl ... mass of bugs... do you think, you have chose the right name? :D (DarkBugStrategy) xD
i like strategy Defense :D also... hmm yeah 4/5
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I can not in good conscience give this game anything more than 2/5.
Even when ignoring a handful of flaws the crashing of the game when trying to save makes it pretty much worthless.
THanks for the effort though.
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Hugely unbalanced, and the grammar was painful yes, but the attempt at drama was even worse. Go back and edit, please. Or should I say, "I would pleased if grammar was fix."
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Even ignoring the mangled language, the game has a lot of problems. The map makes seeing what you're doing a pain, some of the early missions are tremendously unbalanced (6x3 vs 2?), and status attacks are available way too early. When you're outnumbered 3-to-1 or more and enemies have a decent chance of hitting with confusion or stun, winning is pure luck.
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Nice tactic style gameplay but lots of grammar problems. Also I have a problem with the saving part of the game it seems to not respond and crashes my web browser.
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nice game, too long sroty line but i read ir almost of it and u should really check your english dude!!
Evaluation: 4/5
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There are some serious errors in the lead up which takes way too long and the combat map is seriously flawed. Do some grammar work and fix the map and this could be worth playing.
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The English is very rough, and the combat needs a rotate function (so they don't hide behind buidlings). Otherwise, pretty good.
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Lern 2 English plz.
In the opening story: i.e means "id est", or "that is". You used it incorrectly. what you wanted was "e.g", which means "exempli gratia" or "for example".
There's probably lots more, but your story passes all the way through tl;dr and comes out the other side. It needs to be seriously cut down if you want anyone to actually read it.