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great game. its like a brand new take on a classic platformer, and was really enjoyable. also liked how it actually took some thinking to figure out
5/5
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That was surprisingly easier than I was expecting ^^ I was a little disappointed because I was hoping the bonus levels would reunite them, but maybe this means there'll be more chapters or something?
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Adorable! It's so amazing how once again a total new concept can come out so succesful, so creative. I read all the comments and agree with almost all of them. It always bothers me when there is no save function, but I finished the game all at once so I didn't even noticed :D Thank you for such a nice game!
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This is VERY original, not based off of anything (I'm looking at you hanger) and you SHOULD feel proud of yourself for making this.
I wonder why so many people are having problems. Are you using Chrome by any chance? I wonder if they pushed out an update that broke it. Having problems with any other games?
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wow, this game is a bit mind boggling. I can see what Dinochaur means when he says it doesn't have a lot of puzzle functions, but the screen fracture really makes this game a fun challenge even without a bunch of levers and buttons and such.
The screen just wasn't big enough to fit too much more. As a developer, you know how restrictive the dimensions of a Flash game can be some times. I wish I could've added more too. I'm glad you still enjoyed it though.
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A wonderful game indeed but nobody even mentions the music! It fits perfectly and creates a sad but beautiful atmosphere. Love it! 5/5
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An enjoyable game, the main mechanic is really excellent and done really well although I don't know if it's strong enough to be the basis of an entire game. The stanza of text is lovely and gripping, and you feel a good sense of achievement when you beat a level, but I feel the addition of a few more substantial mechanics would make a good game a great one.
I agree that more mechanics would really benefit it. Flash games are so small, unfortunately, you can really only make them about 800x600 at maximum. I needed the borders to move around the fractured pieces, so the game world itself is only 500x500. If I could use desktop resolutions...
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Excellent game, but the last bonus level was pretty cheap and annoyed me (SPOILER ALERT: you just use the box and jump straight across)
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Awesome game gets more difficult to interpret as you go along, really makes you think! Never seen a game like it- very creative and the words along with it were beautiful too :) Please make some more games like this! :P
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This was a great game. I can't believe how simple the areas look after i have completed them and the 'shards' go back in place! I'm only a casual player but i love puzzles! Progressing through levels were paced well. Never felt overly frustrated at any point but never felt like ti was too easy. Sequel?
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So what exactly is the mom doing while the kid is lost? Sitting home eating cake? Social Services should of show up around level 5
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I love the evocation of mental dysfunction. Good choice of background music and excellent voice work. This whole work fits together very nicely with itself. It's a shame the poem was so short, but a work has to be just as long as it needs to be :) Worth 6 stars if I could give it to you.
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THis game right here...This is absolutely a work of art really. I felt myself jumping through those platforms as the child myself. IT had an abstract grip on reality, but that grip was lost quite a few times when you had fallen and had to restart. YOu really need to have an open mind to play this game right, and if you think for a second, it will be easy, you are sadly mistaken. THe quotes at the bottom even made me feel like the whole story line was worth getting to the next page for. I am driven to give the 5/5 for you GRoZleR, good effort on your part, and an excellent story line for those of us who enjoy a good game. I hope to see more like it from you. GOod job.
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great game and fantastic concept. 5/5. but as someone said earlier, please put the story text at the end of the game cause i really cant remember a word after finishing the game. and if am not mistaken, we were promised the end of the story in the bonus lvls, but nothing happened!!. i enjoyed the game and hope to c more from u soon.
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Good puzzle concept. I have one complaint, and that is towards the story. I had a hard time remembering all of the text for the story because I was thinking about the puzzle too much. If you had all of the story text available after the game is beaten, I would give 5/5.
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Wow. This game is amazing. It manages to reference dozens of phrases at once: shattered dreams, run-on sentences, solving things piece by piece, leaps of faith, puzzling together the poem... You name it (:
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Great Game! Very nice puzzles. Very good work. It's just a pitty, that i finished all levels so fast. Will there be more levels or "fractured 2"?
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Brillant! absolutely awesome concept , giving puzzle game all it sense (sorry i think many people said it before) really see no flaws , was an awesome moment thanks to you
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could you add a way to hear the entire song/poem instead of only getting a single line at a time? maybe as an award for beating the story or bonus levels?
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What an inventive gameplay combining puzzle and platform! I also liked the music and the female voice reading out the lines :) Good idea to add the trickier bonus levels! Thanks for that nice work!
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talk about a great mind-boggling game... well done, and great background music, not to mention the touching poetic phrases of the mother in between... awesome!