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12:00AM

Valoración:
2.0
Lanzamiento: October 11, 2018
Última actualización: October 11, 2018
Desarrollador: starrainarts

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Descripción

Juego de terror basado en texto donde debes tomar las decisiones correctas para que tú y tu amigo Jason sobrevivan y descubran el misterio de la muerte de Marcus.

Cómo jugar

Point and click

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1Yearwonder

Oct. 11, 2018

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REALLY good!! I like the suspense, I'm intrigued by the story so far, and the atmospheric touches are done very well. Some grammatical errors could use attention, as they interfere with immersion. In the living room text it should say "where your cat" not "were your cat", the third sentence of the text in the office says "Despite you having an office job, it is only today was you make your way back into the very room that gave you comfort and entertainment". Other than that, there are a few places the wording gets a little awkward, like the final sentence in the living room. If you split that sentence in to two, the ideas you're trying to convey might be a little easier to understand.

Other than a few places that could use some finishing touches, this looks like an awesome game. You do a great job of building suspense and mystery, leaving just enough clues to keep things interesting, without spoiling the ending. I'm really looking forward to the final version!

starrainarts
starrainarts Desarrollador

Thanks for the feedback 1Yearwonder i will surely sort out those mistakes that you were mentioning, thanks for pointing those out.