Punk-o-matic Tracks page 4

it sounds like a random in some way dude, what do you think about mine?

alright this is my third and i wanted to make it a little different i need you guys to leave feedback on all of mine because idk what to change...what do you guys want more of let me know here it is *"Out of the Blue"*

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alright i jus made yet another in 10 minuites and i actually like this one hmm ill actually name this song *"The Thoughts of Insanity"*

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woo another song! here we go *"Prelude to Life"*

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I think you mix too many sounds , I mean they doesn’t follow a line

heres another beta song:

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well randy my first few songs…i barely mixed any sounds…so i got bored and threw all these combos together

some up there ill admit arent that good but i like thoughts of insanity….but i changed it so listen again

well if u want to hear a song without mixed up sounds…go to alter ego on page 3 and thats a good song

alright a new 1 check it out and lemme know what u think *"The Voice Inside"*

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ok the new sucky song of the week *"Burning"*

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Here's my best track. I call it: Rocking, is chillin' [code]------6-2---2-------4--6-3---4---2---2-------4--6-2---5---9-----------4-4-2---2---4--1---5---7-7-7-5-8---8----8---3---7-7-7-5-8---8----1---c---1---1---1---8---2---5-8----3-7-1---2-2-2-5-a---a----2-3-a---2-2-2-5-a---a----4-7-1---3-7-3-7-1---8-1---2-5-4--6-[/code]

Sorry for double post, but I used wrong code signals XD.

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this one is my favorite:

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-revised- The Shoreline

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Here goes...

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Message me and tell me what ya think.

check out my music....hope you like it =)

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awsome song the best i every made

looks at koji rather quizzically

Um…where’s the song? o_0

Personally i like what i have created. It's not quite punkish, it's more like Machinae Supremacy, imho.))

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hope you like it

My first attempt! I welcome all constructive critisism :D

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Ripperdoc….if THAT is your first attempt then I am more than welcome to hear anything else you may have.

If I had one suggestion the part in which the Rhythm Guitar is in constant zeros with the lead at 444-, maybe change every fourth zero to a 10 or a 7. It’ll offer a different sound with the changing lead.

Other than that, keep up the good work.

Hope you like

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I think I creamed my pants after making this. Constructive criticism also welcomed.