Punk-o-matic Tracks page 63

Listen to this. I would appreciate comments about it. I dont have a name for it yet.

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Since no one giving me compliments or criticism, I am reposting this. Compliments and Criticism please! Taemoe: Your song is really basic but has some great moments, try to get original combos not just go through the whole loop. It's sometimes needed to go through the whole loop but not the whole song, then it's boring and unoriginal, but you're onto something, keep trying! 2/5 Memories by Cory511: Good rhythm in the song, especially the start stop thing going on, but it's very simple and straightforward, and no repeated parts, just riffs, Try to get like a chorus. But it's kinda hard not to do something straightforward, but you'll find combos, so don't chu worry, but still....2.5/5 ???#1 by ChemonU: I like it! It's straightforward but has it's very awesome moments, that ending 8887 combo was sweet.But, like Cory511, there's no repeated parts. Try to do at least one part kinda the same at least twice in song....3.5/5 ???#2 by ChemonU: Same as Above ???#1 and 2 by nobodywhocares: Both Had Good moments, but no repeated parts. Simple and Straightforward.....2/5 War Within A Breath Part 1

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War Within A Breath Part 2

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Simple song with no Chorus, since that seems to be the trend. It's kind of random and unsettling, hence the title "Multiple Personalities"

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"M.P.[Slight Remix]"

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Prolly my best work. I call it "Dope"

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Dope part 2

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Yet Another Song I call it "The Lesser Of Two Evils"

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"Lesser of Two Remixes"

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"Ashes"

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"Ashes....A Slight Remix"

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These Are Songs I made pre-Kongregate, Pretty Noob "Needles"

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"What's it like In America?" This Song is Kinda the Same Song But A lil different and Less Kick ass

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"Legend"

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"Punk Rocks"

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klausss — Ever heard of an Edit Button? It’s right under your user…

Anyways, nice songs ScubaJoel, Multiple Personalities a little bland IMO.

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its called: Possible is something.

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My second song, slightly better and more creative. 9---6-7772---2---2---2---2---2---5-5-80-0--0--0----00---0---3--4-00-11--22--3----9---c----0-----------a-a--a---4---4-4-----7---0---1---2---3-2-3-4---8-----99-9---7bbbc---a--------7-7-888----------6-a6-aa-a---0---8-----888----8---------9-6-6---6-6-8-a----- will be adding more to first song, if anyone is interested? rock on.

This is a 2-part series called "Hiding in The Shadows". And I'm kinda new to these forums to sorry if I do this wrong. Hiding in The Shadows Part 1 ---1---c--3--b---b---b---6-1---b--2-4---------6---6---c----------a222444-1--0---4-0-1---7-6-3-68--8888-888-8-89-2-5-2-8--6-83-5-67---9---9-a---------- Hiding in The Shadows Part 2 --333---3---2-------883---2-----3---4-777777--33333333574-783---0---6-8833333---6-0--bbbba---4---0---8-8-8-8---2-2---4---2-3-9---bbbbbbbbcccc--c-a---c---c---bbbbbbbbb-8------a---0---1---7-6-8-28282828281---a-2-2-2------8888888--a-82828-7--8282-2-8888886--

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