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avatar for Woos Woos 9 posts
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hey everyone! i made some simple songs, it’d be nice to hear what you guys think of em!
http://launchablesocks.bandcamp.com/album/lawnmower-party

I always try to do things a little different and try to use instruments and sounds that i create myself. hope you guys like =)

 
avatar for TheWhiteAngel TheWhiteAngel 940 posts
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I thought the last one was alright, but the first two were just collections of noises to me. It’s all creative, but creating a beat that is worth listening to with this creative method of your own instruments, is a challenge you’ll need to work on a lot more. But that’s all just my opinion, I’m not musically talented in any way.

 
avatar for Woos Woos 9 posts
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I see, then i’m curious about what you think about my other songs at http://launchablesocks.bandcamp.com/album/you-and-the-view, they contain a bit more in the way of beats (although i very often omit beats in favor of more melody driven or atmospherical pieces).

 
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avatar for weew6972 weew6972 1 post
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Interesting music. Very atmospheric. I would recommend try to break musical form you’ve established in these pieces and try switching patterns in the middle or add in a key or time signature change. I would like to see these pieces develop and evolve a bit more and see more themes mixed in, perhaps a stronger melodically oriented phrase. This music reminded me a bit of the Portal music and a bit of Aphex Twin. I think the manatee and apples piece was my favorite. Hope this helps.